Paranoia...........

[Pup in Fluff]

Paranoia

Clumsy lies breed insanity

Chromatic definitions
Deflect worries

Illusions of deception
For daily deprivation

Crooked fantasies
Conjuring memories

Straighten mind tricks
Expel all reason

Enriching Heaven
For tomorrows Hell

Promising power
To rise destruction

Paranoia.
 

[Pup in Fluff]

Yeah...it's just something that I came up with out of nowhere. It's supposed to relfect the symptoms and feelings of paranoia.  

[buzzmeplease]

thats definitely paranoia.... really good i like it smile  

[Pup in Fluff]

Thanks!  

[Mistress Spider]

I really like it! The first line is...amazing! Thats always the part I have the hardest time with, finding a good first line that will draw the readers attention! ANYWAYS! I think you are brilliant, and i would love to see more of your work.  

[WildWildWindWhisperer]

It brings the soul to the tip of the emotions that involve such state of being.........
Its lovely.  

[(...c00kiem0nster...)]

I really like your word choice, this sounds good biggrin  

[WildWildWindWhisperer]

(...c00kiem0nster...)

I really like your word choice, this sounds good biggrin

I am looking forward to reading more of your works.  

[Overworkedandunderpaid]

Wow. I love all poetry and I've read alot.

I write some too but I find it hard to gather new words or dig up old ones that make the poem breathe.

I think you've done it.
I really like it!