"Friend"

[7okyo]

FRIEND

Silently it takes me away
To a place where my dreams
Shatters the light
As the hellish voices arise
Filling the air with screams of fear
In a distant land of fairytales
Where demons of the night
Running with fright
And filled with delight
At the sicking sight
Of the hate filled shadows
Searching for life
In my nightmare land
That I created
Because all I want
Is a dear friend to play
And sing and dance the lonely night away
In my twisted land of fairytales
That I cannot escape
No matter how hard I try
Because all I wanted
Is something that I
Could truly call my friend
Lost in the realm of the shadow

By Kraven
~INVY~  

[Lord_Skyy]

I like it. biggrin I do have one suggestion though, as with most of the poetry I read. Have a clear picture of what you are going to describe before you do so. I prefer to write in an abstract view, but readers get confused that way.  

[Cpt Auroran]

I had to read it twice before I could understand what was going on. As for the poem, itself, it was very beautiful. A good job to you, and I hope you write another. ^^