Monotone. : ]

[Frankendoll.]

Monotone.

Distort the voices,
Shield the eyes,
Sever the veins,
And muffle the cries.

Blind all the senses,
Torture the mind,
Grind their bones,
Our freedom defined.

Wage a war,
Declare a fight,
Ignore the screams,
Cry as they might.

Poison the blood,
Watch them die,
Hide behind
A malicious lie.

Pulling teeth,
Breaking bone,
Scorching flesh,
Monotone

What do you think? : /  

[The Man who was Thursday]

Eh.

Rather weak, frankly.  

[Frankendoll.]

Ezra Pound

Eh.

Rather weak, frankly.

Hahahah, thanks. domokun  

[LunaticBelle]

Ezra Pound

Eh.

Rather weak, frankly.

I disagree. I think it's good. I like the rythm, and how simple and uncluttered it is.  

[Frankendoll.]

LunaticBelle

Ezra Pound

Eh.

Rather weak, frankly.

I disagree. I think it's good. I like the rythm, and how simple and uncluttered it is.

Thank ypu : ]  

[Lord_Skyy]

Simple, the title fits it perfectly. The flow never stopped until the end. A monotone thought! biggrin  

[hippiefreak]

Not my favored style, but I rather liked the crisp simplicity or it.  

[Frankendoll.]

Tah both of you. ^. ^  

[hippiepoet1964]

I liked the piece. I thought it had great rhythm and rhyme to it. I found myself moving write along with it. Thanks for sharing.
Peace,
HippieMe  

[Frankendoll.]

Thanks, I'm glad you liked it. : ]