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I made this one off the top of my head. What do you think?

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Prince Lithium

PostPosted: Sat Jan 27, 2007 10:56 pm
How many hurt
From these toils I see
How many cry
From those bleeding

You seem to just walk
Away with your pride
And leave me here
To breathe no more and die

Who the heck are you
To say who I am
I want out of here
From your sick little game

These bleeding walls will hold
What you cannot
To hold me again
And tell me those lies

Those lies they just
Make me laugh more
Cause no one believes
The fool that let me go

They all see you now
They see who you are
They see that you are
Feared by yourself

Who will fear
When fear is fearing
When those things in your head
Seem to actually exist

I lay back and watch
Watch you sit in your head
Watch you cry from the pain
Take it like I did, fool

This is nothing compared
To what I went through
Went through with you
It's nothing

That demon laughing is
Only showing you dead
Showing you that
This entire thing came from my head  
PostPosted: Sun Jan 28, 2007 3:45 am
That was a great poem.  

MuchAdo


The Man who was Thursday

PostPosted: Sun Jan 28, 2007 9:33 am
Typical one-dimensional emo poem.  
PostPosted: Sun Jan 28, 2007 9:39 am
Ezra Pound
Typical one-dimensional emo poem.


And emo I am. There is no denying it.  

Prince Lithium


The Man who was Thursday

PostPosted: Sun Jan 28, 2007 9:53 am
EmpathicPrince
Ezra Pound
Typical one-dimensional emo poem.


And emo I am. There is no denying it.


You could at least fix the one-dimensionality.  
PostPosted: Sun Jan 28, 2007 1:48 pm
Ezra Pound
EmpathicPrince
Ezra Pound
Typical one-dimensional emo poem.


And emo I am. There is no denying it.


You could at least fix the one-dimensionality.


One dimensionality?  

Prince Lithium


Prince Lithium

PostPosted: Sat Mar 17, 2007 4:21 pm
bump  
PostPosted: Sun Mar 18, 2007 5:11 pm
I'm not a big fan of emo poems. ...but I write emo poems... I can't help it, though.  

R a i n b o w Luvinn


Prince Lithium

PostPosted: Sun Mar 18, 2007 5:45 pm
Yeah, I write emo poems all the time. *is emo* My mind just thinks like that. biggrin  
PostPosted: Tue Mar 20, 2007 8:12 am
Personally, I liked it. I thought it was deep and had meaning, and I am very suprised that it just popped into your mind. All my poems that are like that kinda are blah.... LOL  

Awesomely Awkward Allie

Wheezing Gawker

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