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PostPosted: Wed Jan 31, 2007 7:31 pm


long distance suicide
Talking to you is like committing suicide.
Because both of us know its killing me inside.
I wish I could just see you, God knows that we've tried.
But we just weren't there the last time the other cried.

cardio-homocide
From the bottom of my heart
Is where you grasped and pulled,
And now the blood drains out
Like a gunshot wound.

call
Like a deer in headlights,
I stare at my phone,
She said she'd call me tonight,
But I'm still here alone.

battle
From the beginning
You put up such a fight
Even though you were winning
You knew it wasn't right.

st. val's day
This isn't quite what I had in mind.
Maybe we just need to take our time.
Take a trip away from here, and let ourselves unwind.
But nothing really matters, so long as you'll be mine.
PostPosted: Thu Feb 01, 2007 5:40 pm


It seems a bit depressing to me, as I normally prefer more "happy" poems. The language and meter you use seems just fine to me on a quick read-through. Good luck getting more comments.

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PostPosted: Thu Feb 01, 2007 7:23 pm


MyOwnBestCritic
It seems a bit depressing to me, as I normally prefer more "happy" poems. The language and meter you use seems just fine to me on a quick read-through. Good luck getting more comments.
Yes, yes, I lead a depressing life, blah, blah, blah.
My writing is purely expressive, and I'm not going to pretend to be happy because that's what people want.
PostPosted: Fri Feb 02, 2007 10:54 pm


quote="inferno"]There is a fatal fire,
She'll realize she's lived a liar,
My home, my heart is gone,
As she sits and stares from her lonely lawn.

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