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Lord_Skyy

PostPosted: Sat Feb 03, 2007 10:46 pm
Dewdrop

Emerald backdrop, swirling skies,
Crystal leaves, a starry night.
Sapphire flowers bloom and thrive,
In this atmosphere of life.

Forests, green, a sea of trees,
Standing tall, unwavering,
Never winter, always spring,
In this garden made of dreams.

Moonlight shines, to illuminate,
The rolling waves upon the lake.
And this Eden, I present to you,
Happiness, on a drop of dew.


Wrote it for a friend's birthday. She likes Green.
Lots of improv. The rhyme scheme is ... just whatever. xd  
PostPosted: Sun Feb 04, 2007 7:38 pm
This is a beautiful write. Wonderful metaphors. I totally was lost in your precious dewdrop. The first two stanzas being my favorites. Thank you for sharing. I bet your friend loved this write.
Peace, Laura  

hippiepoet1964


OptimisticallyPessimistic

PostPosted: Mon Feb 05, 2007 4:24 am
Wow that's really cool!!!! I got that feeling you get when you are outside on a warm summer night, with fireflies and the night sky all around you. I love it!!!! heart  
PostPosted: Mon Feb 05, 2007 9:48 am
Thank you! biggrin heart This is one of my few not so abstract poems. I'm glad you guys enjoyed it.  

Lord_Skyy


The1UsertoRuleThemALL

PostPosted: Tue Feb 06, 2007 6:32 am
Wow. That's cool. I really like your poem and how you wrote it. It's very touching. Better than my own I conclude. lol.  
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