5 Second Poems - updated 2/10/2007

[[ Ira ]]

In class to keep my hands busy, I write poems or doodle. Yet, when i read them out load people are shocked to see that it has taken be a matter of seconds to write out a verse or two. Please let me know what you think.

-Ira

Apple

A luxurious gift from Adam and Eve
That was fallen from a tree
The soft green reminds you of a meadow
on a nice spring day
Water droplets cover the apple like the
mornings dew.
The crisp taste reminds you
of sumer.
Inside the core the seeds turn into
the north star.

This was a description practice in my English class, however, it sounds like a poem.  

[[ Ira ]]

Run away into the moon
fly into the stars
hand and hand we go together
on a never ending adventure
walk with me through star and ash
rain down on me so that
we can...
Run away into the moon
Fly into the stars
Hand and hand we go together
on a never ending adventure

---

Bringth down from heave above
bread in the ocean air
side by side two friends walk

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[Wolfie Kid]

Those are really good! My descriptive poems can take hours... maybe even days to write! How can you do something that good, so quickly?!  

[[ Ira ]]

I don't know.

I have always been on the creative side since I was a small child. I was always in art and music classes.  

[[ Ira ]]

Thursday's Math Class


Day of Hell:

Running through the street
I see a man in a
red hat
he smiled at me with
a deathly stare
and i became no more
Into Shadow I was cast
into ash
Burried in the Ground
A living body trapt
unlocked by an angel's eye
lark, i was relased
into the morning glory
rebirth alas I am new

----

In Shadow I walk
day by day
lurking in the
night
for anotehr day
when that day comes
shadows fall
I open my eyes
and see you fall

---
There is a man
in the 22nd street
window shop.
Teeth of glass
that shatter when
he speaks
children flee at the site of him
yet his door
wellcomes all!
one day I enter to see
queer man
and i found a
glass eye
stairring my way.  

[Wolfie Kid]

Wow... that's deep, man...