As if ??? stupid enough.....

[Violet the mystical]

Here's a poem I did because I was bored.
Enjoy.

As if i'm stupid enough to smoke ciggaretts,
As if i'm stupid enough to hurt my friends.
As if i'm stupid enough to show all my feelings,
As if i'm stupid enough to not see what my friends are feeling.

As if my dad is stupid enough to get drunk,
As if my dad is stupid enough.
As if my dad is stupid enough to get into a fight,
As if my dad is stupid enough to listen to my mum.

As if my mum isn't stupid enough to smoke,
As if my mum isn't stupid enough to get drunk.
As if my mum isn't stupid enough to leave the radiator on all the time,
As if my mum isn't stupid enough.

As if my friends are stupid enough to make a very bad decision,
As if my friends are stupid enough to get into loads of trouble.
As if my friends are stupid enough to take all the teachers advice,
As if my friends are stupid enough to not know how to fight.

As if my sisters are stupid enough to walk across the road,
As if my sisters are stupid enough to get really bored.
As if my sisters are stupid enough to not like fluffy bunnies,
As if my sisters ain't stupid enough..... God dammit!

As if i'm stupid enough to get into strangers cars,
As if i'm stupid enough to like the teachers much.
As if i'm stupid enough to not know how to survive,
In this cold, lonely place we call earth.

As if i'm stupid enough.....

Just to clarify, i'm not a miserable jerk, nor goth, and hardly ever emo.

 

[Hirashio]

I rather enjoyed this poem. Though, it did get a bit redundant with the AS IF's but I think it works well enough. You weren't goth, emo or other, you are/were yourself. That is a rare trait these days!  

[Violet the mystical]

Hirashio

I rather enjoyed this poem. Though, it did get a bit redundant with the AS IF's but I think it works well enough. You weren't goth, emo or other, you are/were yourself. That is a rare trait these days!

Thanks.
You know, for some reason you remind me of fish.
.....Put down on note pad, must seek pherapy.....
Quickly.
o_0

 

[Hirashio]

Vikay Kamasu

Hirashio

I rather enjoyed this poem. Though, it did get a bit redundant with the AS IF's but I think it works well enough. You weren't goth, emo or other, you are/were yourself. That is a rare trait these days!

Thanks.
You know, for some reason you remind me of fish.
.....Put down on note pad, must seek pherapy.....
Quickly.
o_0

Fish? O.o

Corrects note pad-- Quickly Immediately.  

[Violet the mystical]

Hirashio

Vikay Kamasu

Hirashio

I rather enjoyed this poem. Though, it did get a bit redundant with the AS IF's but I think it works well enough. You weren't goth, emo or other, you are/were yourself. That is a rare trait these days!

Thanks.
You know, for some reason you remind me of fish.
.....Put down on note pad, must seek pherapy.....
Quickly.
o_0

Fish? O.o

Corrects note pad-- Quickly Immediately.

.......
Oh, bollocks!
*Phone just died*

 

[The Man who was Thursday]

frkl.

I read the first stanza and had to stop when I saw every line begin with "as if".  

[Violet the mystical]

Judas lscariot

frkl.

I read the first stanza and had to stop when I saw every line begin with "as if".

Well, technically...
Thats the idea basically.

 

[Lord_Skyy]

Over repetition. Great concept, but... you need better words and clever ways of giving images.

It's "cigarettes" by the way.  

[The Man who was Thursday]

Vikay Kamasu

Judas lscariot

frkl.

I read the first stanza and had to stop when I saw every line begin with "as if".

Well, technically...
Thats the idea basically.

No offense, but it's a terrible idea.  

[Violet the mystical]

Lord_Skyy

Over repetition. Great concept, but... you need better words and clever ways of giving images.

It's "cigarettes" by the way.

Thanks.
Can't focus straight when i'm bored or tired.
If i'm really tired i'll start to make many mistakes.
Like I do when i'm role playing on Gaia.
I'll get repetive too when i'm that bored, like I did with this poem.
........
Giving images?
I'm not certain what you mean by that.