please read me (I don't bite hard.)

[hippiefreak]

Feel free to point an laugh.

I'm not your adverage
tell-me-what-to-think
kinda girl. No,
I march to the pulse of
a different meter(maid)
and even she's confused.

Sorry, darling
I'm not looking for a
build-me-up relation-
(ship).

They're all ply-
wood, and for just once
I'd love to see a brass
doorknob
floating out to sea.

(Captianed by a disgruntal
metermaid of course.)  

[lady_ruler_of_the_zombies]

That's pretty cool, I like how you have a couple of words in parenthases too.
Here are my favorite parts

I march to the pulse of
a different meter(maid)
and even she's confused.


I'd love to see a brass
doorknob
floating out to sea.  

[hippiefreak]

Thank you.