Okay, so it's not txt tlk. It still scared me. Scared me quite a bit.
[Shira is a egypt princess, her father already made the decision who she has to merry. Not satisfied with her father's decision and unable to convince him to choose someone different for her she runs away from him and tries to flee into a live which of she thinks of having more freedom.
Once she reaches the dessert she joins a caravan. The caravan for sure had something else in mind than to give her a new home. They heard of her abscondence and that whoever brings her back will be her husband.
Luckyly she manages to flee again, driven further into the dessert and lost. After one to two days of searching some water or foot she collapses in the hot sand, her face covered in dry tears of desperation.]
Just thought I'd share the, uh... I really can't think of an adjective that isn't massively bitchy for this. Somebody actually used this paragraph as a description for their character, complete with a backstory where she runs away to a live in the dessert. I wonder whether it was cake or iced cream? Note the lack of actually physical or personality description.
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