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Just a poem I wrote late last night

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PostPosted: Mon Mar 05, 2007 3:58 pm
Endless thoughts
Revolve around you,
I want to stop
Think of something new?


I can't stop this feeling,
It's making me sick,
This feeling of falling,
My feelings so thick.


I feel you don't want me,
Just me, not myself.
I'm screaming it to you,
My feelings unfelt.


I'm crying, I'm dying,
Tossed away on the floor,
I thought that I loved you,
But now I am sure.


This thing I was feeling,
So bad for my health,
It wasn't love,
It was hatred itself.  
PostPosted: Tue Mar 06, 2007 9:43 am
Wow - that's quite a dark poem, but I liked the way it rhymed and I especially liked the abrupt ending.  

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