I'm new,and I'm true

[Chortleasd]

Thanks to meh stupid *ahem*parents *ahem* I have to type this all over,which is kinda messed up and kinda makes meh mad. So anyway I'm glad to be here cause I had this invitation for awhile and so since it isn't a roleplay,I guessed I could keep up with it sweatdrop Ok,enough chit-chat,my freinds say I'm good at making up stuff [and I'm not just talking about poems xD] so to prove it I'll make up something ELSE up as I go. stare ...grr parents...ok and please excuse me if the poems are dark,its just I've been really emotional lately and hey,I might even be going emo because for some reason that pain in my chest just isn't going away...Hey that gives me a great idea!! xD

That pain
I know I've felt it before
This game
I know isn't a joke anymore...
What,is this pain in my chest
I know I've got the gold but I still don't feel my best
All my intentions
suicidal questions
Are now and forever put to the test
One moment I could have that silly grin on my face
The next thing ya know I'd think life is a waste
And I still do...
ooooooOOOOoooh I know you don't want me to...
But no matter how hard you try
that special message from you
Even if I love you,will never come through
Ooooh that pain
I wonder if it'll wash away
maybe that pain
I wonder if it'll always stay
Even if it is in my tears
I know it is eternally in me
Because my tears are the sea

 

[Sikorka]

As you said, it was a bit emoish... sweatdrop But I really liked it, you managed to rhyme (which I personally think is the hardest thing to do, specially if it's not really "worked" on), and you did it good. You also got your point across. To sum things up: I liked it alot 3nodding heart  

[Chortleasd]

Yay!! heart ..And omg...that hasmter ish sooo cute add me add me!! COnquer deh evil bunnies muahahahahahah >D