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The Worst Kind of Love

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GabrielLeon

PostPosted: Fri Mar 16, 2007 6:51 pm
The Worst Kind of Love

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If you said, "I love you,"
I'd say, "I'm yours."
If you said, "Sing to me!"
I'd give many encores.

I'd wash your feet,
I'd kiss your hands.
I'd bake you cookies,
I'd clean the pans.

For this is blind love,
The worst kind of all.
I'd do anything for you,
Task be big or small.

I'd sink down a whirlpool,
Through its cascading swirl.
Then crush giant clams,
Just to get you a pearl.

I'd crack open a safe,
To get you a diamond.
I'd steal an emerald,
Which to you I would send.

For this is blind love,
The worst kind of all.
If you told me to kill them,
Then I'd get them all.


The moral of this story is:
Don't fall into a blind love; it gets more and more dangerous as the other person starts to exploit you.
Or something like that. razz  
PostPosted: Sat Mar 17, 2007 12:36 pm
Awesomeness!!...Somethign to be taken serious =^-^= 1o/1o
 

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GabrielLeon

PostPosted: Sat Mar 17, 2007 2:06 pm
Karinja-chan
Awesomeness!!...Somethign to be taken serious =^-^= 1o/1o
Thank you.

And happy Saint Patrick's Day!  
PostPosted: Sat Mar 17, 2007 6:06 pm
Welcome ^-^
 

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PostPosted: Sun Mar 18, 2007 7:24 am
I liked the second part best. The whole poem was really good, but something about baking cookies and clean the pans got to me... sweatdrop heart  
PostPosted: Sun Mar 18, 2007 11:48 am
Sikorka
I liked the second part best. The whole poem was really good, but something about baking cookies and clean the pans got to me... sweatdrop heart
XD
For some reason, all my friends that read it remembered that part best too. XD  

GabrielLeon


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PostPosted: Sun Mar 18, 2007 3:06 pm
Your poem is great! When you talk about "Baking cookies and cleaning the pans" I thought "I do that" but it's because I LOVE to cook and bake, not because he asks me to...more than half the time he doesn't even know. smile This poem really hit home for me about my previous boyfriends....and the moral is definately 0 right! I nearly cried when I was reading this poem..please keep writing more...they are beautiful. smile  
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