Shooting Star Suicide

[Enraptured By The Sky]

Stars explode and are gone forever, never noticed in the first place.
This is how my life is led
Unnoticed and unwanted, waiting to explode
Waiting for some other purpose in this life
Trying to strive for things that seem to be lofted in another galaxy
The brightness of my being often overlooked


I feel as though I'm forever doomed to repeat my history
Burning day by day in the same monotonous way
Burning on but slowly burning out
I may only last a few more nights
Before I throw myself from the skies
Another shooting star suicide


---Comments are loved! This is probably the favorite thing of mine that I've written recently---  

[[Psychotic.Ballerina]]

This is very good. I'm definitely going to think of the stars differently now.

^_^  

[Enraptured By The Sky]

[Psychotic.Ballerina]

This is very good. I'm definitely going to think of the stars differently now.

^_^

Aw, yay! Thank you ^.^  

[Viese Servatika]

It's nice! I like this.  

[Enraptured By The Sky]

Ota4

It's nice! I like this.

^.^ Thank you muchly!  

[kristine54]

oh... really poignant... nice poem... biggrin  

[Gothic_Pheonix]

I loved it. Keep up the good work. SEnd me some of your poems sometime. There's a great place too post poetry and stories called fictionpress.com...pm, me sometime. I'm on the site and my pen name is pegususpheonix. Keep in touch, if you want. Kepp doing what you lkove, ok? I look forward to see your other poems, sometime. biggrin  

[Chocolate Pollution]

wow, thats great! stars hmmmm....theres' alot of figurative meaning to them, I like how you put it ^^  

[I luvs my sesshy]

I love it! biggrin A lot of meaning in it and very deep. I hope you put up some more poems of yours, at least if you have any more. [;  

[Rainbow cat FACE]

gasp!
*notices blaqk audio reference in name and starts obnoxiously singing semiotic love* ^_^

anyway...
thats an amazing metaphor. i really like the burning part. and the brightness part.
=D  

[Rainbow cat FACE]

gasp!
*notices blaqk audio reference in name and starts obnoxiously singing semiotic love* ^_^

anyway...
thats an amazing metaphor. i really like the burning part. and the brightness part.
=D