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some of my crappy poetry

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queenotheworld

PostPosted: Sat Mar 31, 2007 4:55 pm
Winter

NOTE: its kinda song lyrics, the last two verses are like the chorus

I wanted to fly
but my feet are still here
stuck on the ground

well nevermind
all my hopes and dreams
have gone
abandoned by the side of sky

over the years
thinking lost its glamour
blue turned to grey

in the world where i live
all the trees have gone bare
leaving me with a colorless light
from a bland grey sky
to create silloets out the the bones
of something i used to love

what used to be summer turns into fall
what used to be here
never was here at all

tricks of the eye
the seasons can bring
underneath that snow
vibrant green used to ring



Catching Winks in Class

Sleepy is the rest I didn’t get last night
It’s a swirling blue cloud of fog

the binder I’m laying my head down on
Soft but not soft enough

It’s the stale classroom air
full of forgotten papers and textbooks

Sleepy is the breakfast I didn’t eat
The bus I didn't catch

Sleepy is a quiet Death Cab for Cutie song
Engraved in my head, lulling me off to a subdued state

Sleepy is a mix of boredom
and last night’s insomnia

Sleepy is the color of a faux wood desk
Just below my head
A pillow for my exhausted soul.

Forgotten Room

The clock above the window pane,
Ticks in rhythm with the rain

The painting by the dressing stand,
Shows a very distant land

The bed that stands where white walls meet,
With a neatly folded sheet

Dry flowers in a vase of coral
Some lilies, violets, and some laurel

A lonely cry of a loon,
Echoing in a forgotten room.
 
PostPosted: Sat Mar 31, 2007 9:26 pm
your all so creative! and amazing.
gosh.
im jelous.
 

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PostPosted: Sat Mar 31, 2007 11:32 pm
I really liked 'Winter', and 'Forgotten Room'. I especially thought you were good at rhyming in 'Forgotten Room'-- I can't rhyme for jack s**t. D:  
PostPosted: Mon Apr 30, 2007 7:53 pm
havent i read these before...??
they're pretty good
"silloets" = silhouettes razz
sorry, too tired for constructive criticism  

zmorkian


queenotheworld

PostPosted: Tue May 01, 2007 6:00 pm
zmorkian
havent i read these before...??
they're pretty good
"silloets" = silhouettes razz
sorry, too tired for constructive criticism

i cant spell for s**t mrgreen  
PostPosted: Fri May 04, 2007 12:51 pm
queenotheworld
zmorkian
havent i read these before...??
they're pretty good
"silloets" = silhouettes razz
sorry, too tired for constructive criticism

i cant spell for s**t mrgreen


dont worry
you still got 90/100 wink  

zmorkian


rayne_phantom

PostPosted: Fri May 04, 2007 1:20 pm
zmorkian
queenotheworld
zmorkian
havent i read these before...??
they're pretty good
"silloets" = silhouettes razz
sorry, too tired for constructive criticism

i cant spell for s**t mrgreen


dont worry
you still got 90/100 wink


woo! that's a boarderline A! good job!
 
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