Garden of Happiness

[Phynaster]

I wrote this poem some time ago, for an English homework. My teacher said that it was really good, but I thought I should let you people read it and give me comments about what you think. So here it is:

My garden can fit in your pocket,
My garden can be framed in your locket.
My garden can make you feel calm,
My garden can be your bath balm.
My garden can make you feel bright,
My garden can take away your plight.

My garden can light your spirits,
My garden is eternal in these lyrics

 

[Kali Eyad]

I liked it for how open ended the poem is. The garden could be taken literally or it could be something with personal meaning for the reader. Really good.