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Posted: Thu Aug 16, 2007 3:03 pm
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This particular grammar error gets on my nerves. Especially because one of my closest friends uses the word "for" in place of "because" all the time in her papers. It might be grammatically correct, but to the ears, however, it sounds incredibly wrong.
So please, tell me if this sentence is wrong. I have it underlined.
It all started in the school year of 2005 when Roderick enrolled at a charter school in Payson,where he went there for a few weeks, however; there he went under the name of Casey Roderick. As quoted by Dective George Ratliff in Amanda Myers, author of Sex offender, 29, enrolled in seventh grade says, "that he withdrew after attending nine of the 21 days he was enrollled there when the school persisted in trying to obtain the paperwork."Then on January 9 he enrolled in YCFA Achieve Academy, however; it is not sure if he went to school there for the school; for the school would not comment on it.
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Posted: Thu Aug 16, 2007 5:08 pm
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Posted: Thu Aug 16, 2007 6:40 pm
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Posted: Fri Aug 17, 2007 1:25 am
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Posted: Sat Aug 18, 2007 10:52 am
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Posted: Sun Aug 19, 2007 4:04 pm
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Posted: Sun Aug 19, 2007 10:22 pm
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Posted: Mon Aug 20, 2007 10:34 am
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