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"I'm here, I'm alive" a poem for Atoli

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emmisu

PostPosted: Sat Sep 22, 2007 8:40 am
Inspired by "Corruption Fantasy: Atoli Filcet" and Reminisce.

I'm Here, I'm Alive

I keep screaming out
With ragged breaths
Listen to me
I'm here
I'm alive
I'm waving, searching
Look at me
I'm here
I'm alive
Draw your attention from the powerful ones
To these corrupted thoughts
And with your filthy hands
Deliver me from tempatation
I'm begging you
Search for me
I'm here
I'm alive.  
PostPosted: Sat Oct 06, 2007 4:45 pm
Very nice. surprised heart
I like the line "To these corrupted thoughts"
 


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tehmirage_ofdablue_innis

PostPosted: Thu Oct 11, 2007 3:35 pm
The poem is too short to have repeating lines, otherwise it's good  
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