Rate my first chibi? ^^;

[Nabysco]

I drew my friend Sasu O:

 

[aeuio]

umm its not the best but it is still very good!  

[Batman go rawr]

That's good!  

[[Bloody Angel]]

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i think it is very nice for a very first chibi. however, the eyes are not in the same line [they go up and face goes down @-@;] but still the chibi is cute ^-^

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[Crimple]

I find it really difficult of comment and rate chibis since the style itself is, well, super deformed ^^;; so I'll give it a hesitant 3/10

The shoulders should slope downwards. Atm he's looking rather stiff and uncomfortable. If he's tightly strung up maybe angry slanted eyes to convey the attitude better and a shorter neck?  

[Bribble]

I think making the top of the head rounder would do it a world of good  

[wtf its kae]

the suggestions you've gotten so far are good ones, though. that angle on his cheek (viewer's left) is a bit too sharp. make the head a bit more round, and maybe add some more curve to the chin (though not too much)?

finally, the eyes are bit high, too - they seem to be right in his forehead. ):

but i think for a first try at a chibi it's pretty good.