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 Posted: Thu Nov 15, 2007 1:00 pm
My love had left me about two weeks back. After a difficult time concentrating at work, my boss sent me to the guidance office here in my college. There, I was told to write a poem about how I felt.
It does seem writing is therapy; it worked for me, anyway.
"Alone Once Again"
Lying awake at night.
Alone once again.
Flashbacks come and go;
I feel alone.
You said to me,
"Set aside love,
move on, please do."
But I can't.
Alone once again,
I wander through life.
Lost inside again.
Death seems to comfort.
No...I won't.
I won't die again.
Not for you...
I'll live for me.
My soul whispers.
"You must stay strong."
I will be.
I will live again.
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What do you all think?
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Posted: Thu Nov 15, 2007 9:31 pm
Oh my. That poem impacted a lot of emotions on me. I really do love that poem. It is very good and reminds me of when my ex broke up with me. He proposed to me two weeks before. I was pissed but I've moved on to newer people and I ahve a new boyfriend and a better life without him. I haven't been depressed in such a long time. I was always depressed with him. Anywho I really do wish you would continue in poetry. You're very good at it.
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Friendly Conversationalist
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Posted: Mon Nov 19, 2007 11:48 am
sayaandtenshi Oh my. That poem impacted a lot of emotions on me. I really do love that poem. It is very good and reminds me of when my ex broke up with me. He proposed to me two weeks before. I was pissed but I've moved on to newer people and I ahve a new boyfriend and a better life without him. I haven't been depressed in such a long time. I was always depressed with him. Anywho I really do wish you would continue in poetry. You're very good at it. Oh my...thank you. I shall continue on.
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Posted: Wed Jan 09, 2008 11:51 pm
Beautiful. I was almost in tears by the end. I'm glad that writing this helped you. Continue nurturing yourself!
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Posted: Sun Jan 13, 2008 7:40 pm
raineoftears Beautiful. I was almost in tears by the end. I'm glad that writing this helped you. Continue nurturing yourself! Thank you....and I will.
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Posted: Wed Aug 06, 2008 12:39 pm
You're right. YOU SHAN'T DIE! I SHAN'T LET YOU! Such a good person as you shan't die!
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