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Friendly Conversationalist
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Posted: Thu Nov 15, 2007 9:42 pm
[Okay I believe this will help you understand the poem more. It's about a story I'm writing. It's a girl who has to take this test for this guy who has taken over the world. The test changes her life and she runs away and finds a child in the forrest who is incapable of talking but is 3 years old. She begins to teachthe boy to talk and lets him be free. So she is trying to change the march of people.]
They follow him with every step and grace; Everyone moving at his wanted pace. I stand apart from the crowd, Unlike before when I bowed. I'm a changed person now. To you I will no longer bow! I fear you not nor will I ever. You can't take away my freedom! Never! I believe what I want and not in you. What can you really do? Kill me? Go ahead and do it! I have no fear! Into the hell pit!
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