Arms of Love.

[Teh Perverted Muffins]

Ride with me
Into oceans of clear blue suns and days
that will never end with that of a
Sweet lover's goodbye.

Be mine.
To keep until the dawn of our days ends
and the warm breath that paints dreams upon my cheek
Quitely slumbers.

Love me now
As you had before when we both didnt know
what love was, the feel of it, and the shock it gave
Tempting the corners of our hearts.

And forever you'll stay
Like that loyal pet that comforts me in need
softly kisses my fingertips as I layed my head onto yours
For tonight we bring our hands
Into the arms of love.  

[Sworn2Chaos]

Beautiful.
The last two verses are where it really catches me.
The first doesn't do it for me.
The second has great potential.
smile  

[Dark Angel Videl]

yes it's a really romantic poem
I really love it
And i also love the last 2 lines
beautifull poem
but i also like the first line i always love poems with the imaginary of an ocean wink  

[zaylia19]

so beautiful it makes me think of my love heart  

[KittySongLUVsJONASBoys]

Beautiful, i've read some of your other poems, and i gotta say...
you have a talent for this, don't let that go