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A poem about the companion cube in Portal. ><

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Pretty good? (Made it in 5 minutes at 3:00 AM lol)
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I liked it. ^^
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The_Fantabulous_Frenchie

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PostPosted: Mon Dec 31, 2007 1:53 am


Well, i just couldn't resist. this is basically someone in Portal finding the companion cube, going crazy, eventually burning it, then killing himself. Lol. Anyway,

Companion Cube

==Hour 1==
When your first dropped down,
From the heavens above,
That was the moment,
That I fell in love

==Hour 3==
Your shape is so cubic and square,
Your kindness overshadows that you don't have hair,
What GLaDOS said was just not fair!
So now I sit here, in despair.

==Day 2==
I found a hidden panel, a room for you and me,
We can stay together, and be forever happy!

==Day 6==
What's this you say?
You want to stab me and end my days?
Why my faithful friend?
Have you decided it is my end?

==Day 9, Hour 2==
You have been burned,
My heart has been turned,

==Day 9, Hour 3 (Suicide Note)==
But I will always,
Love you.
PostPosted: Wed Jan 16, 2008 9:46 pm


I have to say, a beautiful tribute to Portal. Seriously, you should send that in to Valve, and see if you get a response. (They're actually going to eventually sell a stuffed companion cube soon).

Shade Skypage

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