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Heart with a Key

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sayaandtenshi

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PostPosted: Mon Jan 14, 2008 5:29 pm
Heart with a Key

Under the bloody sea,
Broken upon the skies,
Lies a heart without a key.
A soul filled with lies.

The eyes are full of grieving.
The mouth scarcely used.
Under the shadow leaving,
The mind always mused.

A virus fills the water,
Unknown to the owner.
The body getting hotter,
No longer a loner.

Under the blue sea,
Filled upon the skies,
A heart with a key,
Given without lies.

Ashley Friedrick


I'm not depressed. This just came to me after reading a poem my mother wrote.  
PostPosted: Fri Apr 25, 2008 7:41 am
{Fact}

Or

{Opinion}?

"...and who are we to be but kings...

I can't see why no one else commented on this yet.
It's beautiful.
..in this noble game of chess..?..."
 

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PostPosted: Fri Apr 25, 2008 11:58 am
I like it as well. Beautifully written. ^^  
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