our hearts beat our bass

[zaylia19]

i did have my doubts
the shame of asking,
who do i love?
soon to find out
that without you
my hand alone and cold

you are the one
you are my present
and he is my past

tears wiped with forgiveness
as you hold me now
our hearts beat with eachother
with so many feelings now
that feel so right.
i know it is You
music from your heart
that fills me with this ecstacy,
of knowing my true love

i promise you now
that as long as both our hearts beat
our musical love
will continue on  

[llllIIlIlIIlllIlIIIllIl]

Very creative! I love the style in which you wrote it, and the way you compared in to music. Very artistic.  

[Brattyteen]

It almost sounds like a song..I love how you kept that sound or well tone just right..^^  

[Broken_Angel_xXx]

That poem is so wonderful just the way ur words flow like a calm river and the way u compare heart beats to a beat of music is just glorious! keep it up!  

[Dark Angel Videl]

When I read the titel I didn't knew what to expect.
Well I need to say good work.
I love the title compared with the poem.
I fully agree with those above me.
Good work