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Is this poem good?
Yes, very.
66%
 66%  [ 2 ]
It's okay...i guess
33%
 33%  [ 1 ]
No, not at all.
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PostPosted: Sun Jan 27, 2008 9:25 am
Here today,
And everyday,
Has nothing at all to do.

But sit around,
Doing nothing,
Thinking 'bout me and you.


I know it's only two stanzas, but I think it's pretty good. What do you guys think?
 
PostPosted: Tue Feb 05, 2008 8:17 am
It's very good. It kind of gets you thinking a little.  

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Honeydukes Lover

PostPosted: Sat Feb 23, 2008 8:11 pm
Thanks. ^__^ I thought it was a little too short, but thanks. That means a lot.  
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