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Hinata's Prayer

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Allison Grey

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PostPosted: Thu Jan 31, 2008 8:46 pm
This is a poem that I wrote. Lady konoha (my bud) said that it reminded her of Hinata, so it became hers.

Hinatas Prayer.

Spoken whispers
wasted breath.
Why I bother,
to fill my chest.

Love unending; I breathe for you-
never for myself, that's what I do.
Keeping count, for my friend,
one more breath, just again.

This I ask-
one thing now.
Tomorrow-day,
I think I shall.

Its based on Hinata's love for Naruto, and how she breathes for him, not herself. She is asking the gods to give her the strength to tell him how she feels, and she now believes that she is strong enough. (GO HINATA!!)  
PostPosted: Sun Feb 03, 2008 4:38 am
That is SO sweet!  

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PostPosted: Sat Feb 23, 2008 10:08 pm
Beautiful. Great job!  
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