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Envy Hidden Among Friends

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Brattyteen

PostPosted: Sat Feb 09, 2008 12:43 pm
Well this poem starts off sweet and nice but then has a change of events..so I decided to share with the guild hopefully you all find it interesting...

Envy Hidden Among Friends

A friendship that blossomed in the strangest way.
She was there for me and I was for her.
We were almost inseparable during the day.
Never a dull while pass, that much I’m sure.
We could talk for hours throughout the daylight
Opposite we may have been, it matters not
Among eyes she was the light and I the night
We became very much alike but forgot
Yet, what was hidden in the dark abyss?
Envy, loathing, and anguish was found among us
Our friendship was nothing more then a hiss
Values and oaths were forgotten now it’s just…
A void, an inky black void has shown
Our friendship now ceases to ever really be known…
 
PostPosted: Sat Oct 10, 2009 10:52 am
wow, it's good
intense
but good ^.^
good job
 

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PostPosted: Tue Nov 10, 2009 7:53 pm
thats amazing and I can relate to it completely!  
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