New twist on the babys (not for young veiwers rated M)

[bellydancing dog]

Ok so this takes place from right before diva had what ever ya call it with riku till the end battle (don't worry there is not a lot of battling and for those people who don't like to read it will not be long, and for those who want to challenge themselves on reading then here you go my spelling is somewhat bad)

So now I take you back the that day on the red shield base

"Kai"
"Riku!!!!!!!!!"
"Don't worry Kai I have something special planed for Riku" said diva
"You monster what are you planing on doing to my little brother?"
There was not another word from diva or Riku But all of it Kai could see he let out a little chuckle as diva stood there wandering how it works(she her self was looking to have kids and she had to do something with one of Saya's Chevaliers but diva had no clue how)
"Amshel" said diva talking in a cell phone amshel had gave her for emergency's.
"yes diva"
"how does this making kids with Saya's helper work?"
"ok diva you just do what humans would normally do with other humans but when you done you give him your blood while you take his"
"ok thank you amshel"






Oh no its not over yet after doing that with Riku Diva couldn't wait to have kids Little did she know NA I KEEP IT A SECRET!!! Just keep reading and you will see what happens more like read but we wont get all technical

Ok now this part is totally my own part of the story it never happened in the real show. We take you to an opra house where diva had just finished practicing and all her Chevaliers' are gone (not like she need any knowing the ride she's in for)
"Diva I've always loved you not saya even though I am hers I love you and to proove it I am willing to make baby's with you"
"Well I already did it to Riku but maybe I could have 4 kids that would be awesome.
Lets do this"

While Haji and Diva went into the back room some one else was following them

"OMG Haji how could you I thought you loved me"
"Oh to late he's gone and his baby's are mine"
"I will Have to kill you and your baby"

Ya now they take off their bulletproof vest (WHY WERE THEY WEARING THOSE) to have as little weight as possible(so its easier to jump high) and started fighting. it was neck and neck until 2 hours in Saya got really fat and fell to the floor (lucky for her she was just standing)
"What is happening to me"
"NOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!! How can this be"
"What do I have a zit"
"No you're pregnant"
"How? I would never be that dirty to do it with the peasants u have as help"
"Then this is only one logical explanation. The time space continuum gut messed up and some how my baby's got u pregnant"
"Ok Diva I know you can be a little dumb but time space continuum that makes no sense and there is no logical explanation to this it just happened."

For those of u who like my story and would like to read more you will just have to wait and if i win I will make more (even if i lose I can make more got a good imagination)  

[bellydancing dog]

bump (maybe it is not funny) (or it was so funny they couldnt stop laughing)  

[cylleona]

Lot's of spelling mistakes. Use spell check if you have it. Firefox has it and it's really helpful.
And it's not very fluid either. And very OOC but I guess that is to be expected with humor stuff.

Good job but you should think about working on it a little more. 3nodding

Oh and by the way they're called 'Chevaliers'
 

[bellydancing dog]

fullmetal_fantasy

Lot's of spelling mistakes. Use spell check if you have it. Firefox has it and it's really helpful.
And it's not very fluid either. And very OOC but I guess that is to be expected with humor stuff.

Good job but you should think about working on it a little more. 3nodding

Oh and by the way they're called 'Chevaliers'

ty  

[eternally_the_siren_sings]

That was difficult to follow.  

[Anaia Twitchy]

Agreed. I was lost... ;_;  

[Grand Chevalier Haji]

I liked it! xd xp  

[Shadow Saria]

Im Confussled but it made me lol a lil. 3nodding  

[mystic_moonlight65]

umm very interesting but confusing.