Art trouble o____o

[SniperWolf16]

Well I'm working on my first set of fanart and I was wondering what I needed to fix on the arrogant yet beautiful Sarafan Raziel (the girl would be his fiance Marian Anna)
 

[Reaver Of Souls Raziel]

Raziel's legs are too short and his face is a bit to narrow. Otherwise, good work =O  

[SniperWolf16]

: ::thinks:: I MAY need to fix that lol Make him look stronger lol Notice I put the stuff on he was wearing as a wraith? Yeeeeaaaahhh whee