Makes me mad [Fanfiction.net story]

[xXgoth_girl12Xx]

This is a story I found on fanfiction.net, which is very good, but it makes me mad. Why? It has very bad punctuation. Let me correct that- It contains NO punctuation whatsoever.
That, and there is some bad grammar.
If you want to read it, you'll find it here.
But please note-
>>It contains shounen- ai [boyxboy] hints and such. That and it is a Yu-Gi-Oh! fanfic.<<  

[Darkness Sierra]

Oh my god.

I, myself, adore Yugioh and it's fanfiction community.

That...fanfiction is a disgrace.

eeevil....EEEEEVIIIIIIL  

[Cheerfulhope]

>.< That was terrible.

I couldn't even get through the first five lines. gonk  

[Natsuri]

Devoid of punctuation, huh? If there was a second chapter on that story, I don't wanna read it.

EDIT: I only read it because I was expecting it to be an onslaught of mangled phrases and words. confused  

[Nicholas Kaze]

One second, there's something in my ear... oh, never mind, it's just my brain melting.

Now, where was I?  

[Farrago]

I couldn't read past the first run-on sentence. Scary... O_o