Monsters Crawl

[Shadow(AoD)]

What are these monsters i can hear
they seem to be all over, everywhere

They try to scare me, even kill me
I try to tell, but no one believes me

They are here and they plan to stay
“We want to eat you” I hear them say

They creep and they crawl
Up and down my bedroom wall

In their mouths are their sword like teeth
Their mouths are as though they are a sheath

So they wait and they hide
Waiting for me to walk inside

And then they attack like assassins of the night
They kill me quickly not even the slightest of a fight  

[Dragons Willow]

EEEKKK!!! you're gonna make me scared of the dark again!!!! gonk

this was great!

my only critique is to mabye clean this stanza up a bit...it's kinda rough around the edges....maybe... mrgreen
"In their mouths are their sword like teeth
Their mouths are as though they are a sheath "


i'm done now! yay for making me have to turn the lights on!!! sweatdrop