crimson tears

[0kurohono0]

Crimson tears flow
life begat death
happyness begat pain
crimson tears fall
does death end the pain
or is it the beggining
if we love life so much
why dont we love death
life is the true hell
i wish to die and sleep no more
no more pain no more sorrow
crimson tears in a pool
thats not a tear but blood
do you wish to see?  

[Shadow(AoD)]

There's quite some emotion in this. I like it. You should check some of mine out to see if you like them. Thanks for posting the poetry. Keep it up. Heaven is Love. Peace.  

[0kurohono0]

come on people read and comment  

[afinaruri]

KuroHono09

come on people read and comment

Good things come to those who wait...

And on that note, I like it. Not a new idea, but a good take on an old one.  

[0kurohono0]

and those who wait die waiting ahahahahahahahaaa  

[Broken_Angel_xXx]

I like it... honestly im new to this dark poetry and everything but i think it's really good! keep it up!