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Innocent Kiss

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Is it polite to ask someone why they kissed you?
Of course! It's nice to understand why you're loved.
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Well, this is kinda awkward. Maybe you should stay silent and accept?
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If you don't know already, maybe you should just remain ignorant.
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PostPosted: Sat Aug 23, 2008 9:51 am


A innocent kiss from one friend
Standing up like this, myself I defend.
To someone I never would have before
Where am I getting this courage, and more?

I stood up to you, who ordered me around.
Should I go back to her, should I back down?
Now you won't speak to me, won't see me.
My head is spinning with this new vestige.

The proof is in my eyes; something is different now.
In someway, I have changed, somehow.
The song plays on the radio, "It was only a kiss / it went something like this."
I listen to my story, my song, and ponder, all because of a innocent kiss.

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Last night, I had gone to a friend's house and she kissed me on the forehead, seemingly innocent, but...I sensed something more. Also, I probably enjoyed it more than I should have. -gulps-

If that were not bad enough, I had stood up to my ex-boyfriend who bosses me around in the same night, and now he is not speaking to me, at least, not as he used to. I am not sure what to do. He is not happy for me standing up to him, and I suspect he may be jealous.

If, along with your comments of the poem, could you give advice? I do like her as a friend, and I am tempted to ask why she kissed me for seemingly no reason, but...should I?
PostPosted: Sat Aug 30, 2008 6:55 am


It's a good poem, most definetly, but I don't know what to say to that happening. Maybe, it was just a little joke. Me and my friends (girl and boy) would play truth or dare, and some of the dares were "...lick everyone in this room's nose." and "...keep your tongue on that pole for 60 seconds." Yeah. The nose licking one we gave mostly to guys, since there were other guys in the room.

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