On the 16th Floor

[GTTNG HGH N TH DWNLW]

On the 16th story I look down
I think of the possibilities
I think of the adversities
I think about life
I think about death

On the 16th floor I look down
I think of the pain
I think of the joy
I think about life
I think about death

On the 16th floor I look down
I think why?
I think because...
I think how?
I think because...

On the 16th floor I look up
I think about my dreams
I think about the beauty
I think about philosophy
I think about the end

On the 16th floor I jumped down
past all the floors I flew
my last thought was about the good
my last thought was about the beauty
my last thought was about forgiveness
my last thought was why did I do this?  

[Dark Angel Videl]

I like it, the end is really unespected.
I never thaught the poem would end like it did.
I think it comes about the lokking up thing.

Anyway good work, caught my intention untill the end  

[GTTNG HGH N TH DWNLW]

Thanks!  

[ThexHappyxHeartxBreak]

I think poeple spend most of their lives "looking down" and all it takes is one second too "look up". When you look up you see all of the reasons to your life.
I like it.

 

[GTTNG HGH N TH DWNLW]

ThexHappyxHeartxBreak

I think poeple spend most of their lives "looking down" and all it takes is one second too "look up". When you look up you see all of the reasons to your life.
I like it.

Exactly.  

[xXYami no KokoroXx]

It's really sad, that the person didn't realize all that until it was too late. But, also very, very good. You're a great writer, Wendi.^^