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MOON_SHADOW76

PostPosted: Thu Feb 26, 2009 12:59 pm
I've got butterflies in my stomach
With wings made of glass
They're ripping at me and making me bleed, even though you can't see.

I've got this pain in my chest it makes it hard to keep breathing.
The doctor can't fix it, only you can save me.

I've got this voice in my head.
It tells me nasty things.
The pills don't make him sleep, they make him smile with glee...because it means he's right

I've got no voice its been drained out
Because no one hears
And my scilent screams are running out  
PostPosted: Wed Aug 12, 2009 5:04 pm
When I read the first line i thought this would be a broken love poem.
I wasn't even close.
It's hard to say how I felt after reading this... I like the way you discribe your feelings in it. I don't understand the only you can safe me line in it.

Well that's my misunderstadning in the poem I suppose.
Well done, really.  

Dark Angel Videl
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