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Ok, this one is currently under the title of Unlikely Angel. This excerpt was taken from somewhere around the middle-end-y part of the first chapter. I'd like to note that bad grammar on the part of Fi is intentional.

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"I was told to come and meet someone named Fiara, nicknamed 'Fi', who was due to die sometime midday today."
"Due to die?"
"Yes, everyone's destiny is all laid out, for the most part. There are a few things that a person can do to change their destiny. But most of the details are already set when they are born."
"What?! So I've been doomed to die at an early age since I was born?"
"No. You were originally going to die in your 90's. When you left the house, for some reason the book changed and said you were to die midday today."
"What, so the simple act of leaving my house changed my destiny and cut my life short 83 years?!"
"I realize that this must be hard to process for one as young as you?"
"As young as me?! You don't look to be much older than I am!"
"I am 717 years old, I will be 718 in about 3 months. I daresay that is much older than a mere 17 years."
"717?" I asked, dumbstruck. She nodded, "But... well... that is... You look great."
"After death, a person's body stops aging if they become an angel or higher power of some such sort."
"But wouldn't that mean that...?"
"Yes, I died exactly 700 years and 9 months ago on my 17th birthday."
"Some birthday."
"It could not be helped."
"Why? What happened?"
"It... does not matter. Do not worry yourself with the past, it has gone, and it will not return. What is done is done. We cannot change the past, but we can shape the future. And right now, we must help shape you so that you may guide and protect another to their future."
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I would've liked to include more in this, to give you a better feel for the two characters you meet in this excerpt, but I was worried it would be a bit lenghty. If you'd like to see more, let me know.

^_^ Thanks. *glares at question marks* They weren't there when I previewed.... (Heehee. I fixed it.)
lol "Indeed Daniel Jackson." (I've been saying that all day)
... Should I post more then?

Awesome! Wonderful! I loved it! I'd like to read more, but for your protection I wouldn't post a lot. Some sickcos like to steal people's work. So, if you do post anymore, let it be from like...page fifteen from your story.
Great work by the way. Awesome. Indeed.

LOL. Well, great work! i would like to see more your work in the future!
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*shifty eyes* Indeed.

HAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!! *composes herself and smiles, not able to help herself* Indeed! GAH! HA!

I liked the one where she like died... that's what I gather, anyways... I think it would be a very good start on something if you'd like to make it something. If that makes any sense at all... sweatdrop

It sounds good just keep going on it. I think a Guardian Angel would be considered dead, right? Do you have the whole plot out? I feel that really helps me, at least, in finishing a story. Indeed.