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Cherub Hope

PostPosted: Wed Mar 18, 2009 8:38 pm
Thought I'd post here. 8D

Some recent art of mine.

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Done on SAI yo. <3

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Also done on SAI. (yo again)

I rushed through the second one, but I'm pretty happy with it.
 
PostPosted: Thu Mar 19, 2009 3:39 am
The line-art is pretty good. It has a few flaws, but what artist doesn't have flaws?
The one thing I noticed is that you might want to be more observant at how you shade and highlight. I see some parts of the drawings at where you've shaded even if it should be highlighted.
This problem/confusion is easily solved, though. 3nodding

When you're drawing (dunno if you make the line-art in PS or draw'em by hand. let's say PS) make sure that you have a lot of space that you ain't going to use. That way you can make a dot that will act as the source of light.
Any surface facing away from the source will be shaded and every surface facing the light will be highlighted. ^^

On top of that you could try practising some anatomy to make sure you shade in a way that brings out the right shapes.

I hope this helps.
Sincerely,
//Varulvsnatt

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Cherub Hope

PostPosted: Thu Mar 19, 2009 9:19 am
Thank you very much!

Yes, I'll keep the whole light-source thing in mind. Shading is still one of my weak areas, but I think I'll improve along with the anatomy. Thank ou for the critique. heart
 
PostPosted: Fri Mar 20, 2009 12:26 am
Cherub Hope
Thank you very much!

Yes, I'll keep the whole light-source thing in mind. Shading is still one of my weak areas, but I think I'll improve along with the anatomy. Thank ou for the critique. heart
I'm glad I could be of assistance. ^^

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PostPosted: Fri Mar 20, 2009 11:26 am
Cute work, just sharpen up your anatomy skills and you'll be well on your way  
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