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 Posted: Thu Nov 03, 2005 2:58 pm
I wrote this for a contest I am going to enter. It is based off the song "Sonne" by Rammstein. It's a song in German, but I have it translated into English too... It's not very good... It's not posting right, so I will put it in the next post, I geuss.
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Posted: Thu Nov 03, 2005 3:07 pm
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Posted: Thu Nov 03, 2005 3:08 pm
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Posted: Thu Nov 03, 2005 3:10 pm
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Posted: Thu Nov 03, 2005 3:15 pm
That's it! Please tell me what you think!
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Posted: Thu Nov 03, 2005 4:22 pm
How could you not think thats good? I enjoyed reading that, however there are a few spelling errors, but other than that its pretty good!
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Posted: Fri Nov 04, 2005 11:46 am
Tellius How could you not think thats good? I enjoyed reading that, however there are a few spelling errors, but other than that its pretty good! Thank you! I did use spell check. By spelling errors do you mean things like 'there' instead of 'their'? I do that a lot.... sweatdrop
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Posted: Fri Nov 04, 2005 1:20 pm
Myou_Sama Tellius How could you not think thats good? I enjoyed reading that, however there are a few spelling errors, but other than that its pretty good! Thank you! I did use spell check. By spelling errors do you mean things like 'there' instead of 'their'? I do that a lot.... sweatdrop Yea, that's exactly what I was talking about. I do alot to, but I usually catch myself when I read through it. Keep it up!
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Posted: Sat Nov 12, 2005 1:20 pm
Tellius Myou_Sama Tellius How could you not think thats good? I enjoyed reading that, however there are a few spelling errors, but other than that its pretty good! Thank you! I did use spell check. By spelling errors do you mean things like 'there' instead of 'their'? I do that a lot.... sweatdrop Yea, that's exactly what I was talking about. I do alot to, but I usually catch myself when I read through it. Keep it up! I will read through it again! Thatnk you for the advice!
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