Sorry, the spacing was extremly messed up. It wasn't to look that bad. Anyway, this is a story I wrote for english class. We had to write a story about a made-up hero. If you could, please read it, tell me what you thought, I don't care how cruel the criticism is.
Or if you don't want to read it, just post a response saying: "I'm not reading this."
I fixed "...to see if Mortis was still there, he wasn't" to "...to see if Mortis was still there, the horse was gone."
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