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CrossFire43
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PostPosted: Mon May 18, 2009 12:49 pm

This area is for poems about lies, lying, distrust, cheating.
 
PostPosted: Mon May 18, 2009 12:51 pm
Lying Sonnet


"Lying" by Mike (me) 3/5/08

Why did you lie?
What did I ever do to you?
No everything won't be alright.
My once vibrant red heart is blue.
Feel my heart.
Do you feel the pain?
Its full of tart.
and lots of cain.
I saw what you did.
Still I tried to be blind.
After words you walked with a shut lid.
That is why I cried.
For I found that you cheated
and left my heart defeated.
 

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PostPosted: Mon May 18, 2009 12:53 pm
The white lie, in a dark world. By me (Mike 8/17/0 cool

You begin to see the sore sight
You prepare to not cause a fight
They are not in the current dwealing
For you have told them something that leaves you swealing.

You fib...
They no know nothing of their sin
Yet you wish to hide their pride
In order to save your hide.

Why do you let them walk blind?
Why did you just walk by?
You knew that they were in mistake
Yet you acted fake?

They walk dark into the night
Awaking with such a fright
To find that you are not a friend in need
But a stabber caught in a bad deed.

 
PostPosted: Mon Jun 01, 2009 2:11 pm
lying sonnet

lies are very destructive
especially to a relationship

I like 5/5


a whilte lie in a dark world

I don't know if I undestood it all that well
was I supposed to take it personal or what

4/4  

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PostPosted: Mon Jun 01, 2009 2:45 pm
GUILTY PARTNERS
by UC Poika

Your pain is clear
Insides hanging out
Moved by emotion
Eyes screaming it
Your clammy hands
Sweater borne
Blood in your pockets
Red eyes mixed with water
The peace of your soul
Stolen with her stares
Sitting on the table
Knife under white knuckles
Murder ponders
A cheater self
A cheating spouse
A dead or dying family
But Sadness triumphs
As she embraces you.  
PostPosted: Sun Jun 07, 2009 5:47 am
UC Poika
lying sonnet

lies are very destructive
especially to a relationship

I like 5/5


a whilte lie in a dark world

I don't know if I undestood it all that well
was I supposed to take it personal or what

4/4

The second one I created to have a double meaning.... some like the first meaning of a betrayed friend..others like the meaning of a Black man gone for revenge...which one it is..I will never tell whee  

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PostPosted: Sun Jun 07, 2009 6:21 pm
"The second one I created to have a double meaning.... some like the first meaning of a betrayed friend..others like the meaning of a Black man gone for revenge...which one it is..I will never tell "

I see. Thank you Cross Fire.  
PostPosted: Sun Jun 07, 2009 9:05 pm
UC Poika
"The second one I created to have a double meaning.... some like the first meaning of a betrayed friend..others like the meaning of a Black man gone for revenge...which one it is..I will never tell "

I see. Thank you Cross Fire.

Your welcome...some times I like to switch my writing style up and either go for a different form or a double meaning. You should always try to expand your horizons of both writing and all aspects of life.  

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