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Day darker than night

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PostPosted: Fri Jul 24, 2009 9:03 pm
To you the day is as bright as could be.
Happiness fluttering about.
The sweet aroma flowing through air.
All I smell is death
The sun has burned out
All that is left is the dark and just like death I am cold.
No sun to warm me or to brighten my day.
I see depression and fear.
The smell of death seems so welcoming when your day is darker than night.
 
PostPosted: Sun Jul 26, 2009 8:30 am
It's a short poem. But it's good.
I don't understant the second and third line about hapiness and a sweet aroma, it's weird to put that in when you smell death yourself.

Anyway your the poet and you know why it's there.
It's still a good poem though  

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