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Silent Lullaby

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Dragons Willow

PostPosted: Sun Jul 26, 2009 11:53 pm
"Silent Lullaby"

She tried to hold the tears within her mind,
as she dreamed about the days that she'd passed by.

While storm clouds gathered she tried hard to find,
someone to catch the pain she could not cry.

Silently she wished her soul to bind,
but with love-clipped wings she knows she'll never fly.

To have the joy she'd dreamt of in her mind,
she hums a tune, her silent lullaby.

~END~

AN:yes, i wrote my own lyrics to the song from the movie Silent Hill, 'Silent Lullaby'...i think it's the chorus tune i was thinking of when i wrote this...so it follows the music...sorta. maybe?  
PostPosted: Fri Jul 31, 2009 3:54 am
It's a great poem, I like it.
I really love the way you've wrote this!!! The rhyming and the words
everything flows really good.

Great work  

Dark Angel Videl
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