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PostPosted: Tue Aug 11, 2009 6:08 pm
Name: Luther Cross
Aliases/ Nicknames: Cross

Physical Description:User Image

Age: 20 {not dead}

Special Accessories: His mentors sword, it has been said that it can slay demons, really it just looks nice.

Skills:Fiction writer.

Abilities:can see souls, and hallows.control over Fire, and electricity, how ever can only focus them to his fists. allows him to fight hallows.

Personality:Kind and helpful, yet sad.

Biography/History: Luther was the son of a ghost Hunter. he watched as a monster with a hole in its chest as it killed his father.The Hallow looked much like a wolf with spiked chains around it front left and back right leg. the Hallow came after him next cutting his face and making him blind in his right eye. A monk came and killed the monster saving his life. this man was named Kuoru, From that day on he could see the souls of the dead.training to fight the things called hallow, for the next six years. learning to fight from an old monk in japan. Kuoru didn't say much of him self, teaching him the weak points of the monsters, and bit about life and death, no more. Luther took an oath to kill the monster that killed his father. At the age of sixteen he left his Master behind to go to school, hoping to pick up clues to find the Hallow that killed his father.

Signature/Patented Technique: "Blinding Fire " after a punch combo he gets his hands close to the opponents face, setting his hand on fire. this blinds his opponent briefly. Luther uses this to fun away.

Guild Status: not sure what you mean sorry.

Online Schedule: eastern coast. daily.  
PostPosted: Wed Aug 12, 2009 5:04 pm
About your minor elemental control, could you go into more detail as to how many you can control? (I have a feeling that you only have power over fire, but I'm only wanting to be clear on this.) Other than that I see no problems other than the small bio, which leaves allot of holes open in his past. You could give some ideas of long he trained under the monk's tutelage, or how young he was when the "Hollow" (hint hint) killed his father and took his vision; you may even go so far, as to tell the reader, what the hollow looked like.  

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