Drawin free art/ Need critique ^^;

[RalphLupus]

Ello! The name's Ralph and I feel like drawin some stoof so if anybody wants a sketchy of their character of whatever, step up. Art ish at the bottom. ^^

I also want some critique. Im starting on a project called "Regenbogen und Dämonen" and I would like some critisism on the plot.

Plot synopsis:
A year after the unforgetable and dreaded macrowolf world tour, the world and it's inhabitants were at a calm until suddenly, the earth was shaking and the skies had darkened. Shortly after, the world had transformed into a nightmarish acidtrip! Bizzare demons and monsters quickly swarming the streets, the earths military tried to fight them off but alas, they had fallen. Who or what was responsible for this? A tower from the depths below had risen and on the highest floor of this obscure structure was RALPH! As the earth is taken over by Ralph's tyrannical foot, three people were for some reason kidnapped by the Fuhrer. An AMS agent named George, a feared killer who goes by the name of Lizzie and Boris. With that said, Is earth doomed forever?! and what could the Fuhrer Ralph possibly be plotting?! Join in on this wacky and twisted adventure to find out!

bleh yeah...and now for sum art :3






I'll have a coloured version of this pic in soon :3  

[Rainey_angel81]

you can draw Rainey if you want  

[Aijo_Iceblood]

you can give aijo and/or ari a shot if you wish......
reference pics  

[Jojo the snow leopard]

did i hear free art?  

[CyrusVillalobo]

X3 free art x3  

[RalphLupus]

hehe ima fishy

did i hear free art?

Yush you did! ^-^  

[NexNeon]

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