Poetry Page

[Samuri_of_Sol]

This is where I am going to post some of my poems, together, rather than have a new thread for each one. If you like them, or have advice, comment. If you have critisms, comment. Anything to say, go ahead. And now, to start off, this is one I already showed to Mrs Gey when I applied to the Guild.


A Poem To My True Love

A joy that fills me with such mirth
A pure white that falls to Earth

A being with such a plain visage
A being as temporary as the mirage

A cold that cuts down to my core
A feeling that never becomes a boor

A smile on every youth’s face
A grimace from elders of the race

A season never filled with grays
A moment that never strays

A fortress that spreads across the lands
A battalion built with tiny hands

A light crunch beneath my feet
A smile I give to those I meet

A feeling that shall continually grow
A wondrous thing I simply call “snow”  

[B3autiful_trag3dy]

I really like it, it's very creative ^ ^
The rhyming is awesome. haha ^ ^  

[Samuri_of_Sol]

Sorry I was gone so long, but here is something to make up for it...I hope. This is a short poem about something I hate that people do in public. Talk on their phones.

Hands Free To Be Around Their Neck

Their jaw’s unhinged,
And it just makes me cringe!
Standing in the middle of the hall
And they dare to make a courtesy call?

They yell on their phone,
Can’t they tell they’re not alone?

Useless words clog their ears,
And it nearly brings me to tears!
Not paying attention while in a store.
They even have the nerve to block the door!

They yell on their phone,
Can’t they tell they’re not alone?

Their eye’s are all glazed,
I want their faces to be razed!
Driving in the middle of the street,
Evel Knievel wouldn’t have tried this feat!

They yell on their phone,
Can’t they tell they’re not alone?