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PostPosted: Sat Oct 03, 2009 6:57 pm
Name: Ryuta Kyoya (Ree you tuh) (Key yo yuh)
Aliases/ Nicknames: Candy Kid

Physical Description: Ryuta is a short kid around 5'0" tall and is fairly thin weighing 90 lbs. His left eye is light blue and his right eye is silver. His hair is is medium length but spiked up in the back. His hair color is a silver/white in color. He has a scar on his back that looks strikingly similar to the kanji "Flower."
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Age: 12 died??? (Yet to determine)

Zanpaktou's Spirit & Name: Hibana
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A woman with extremely pale skin and a kimono made of Ice with a flower forming in the back.

Zanpaktou: Not Achieved
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(normal and shikai sorry)
Dull and unable to cut anything has to add kido to it to cut something.
Shikai Release: Shouka (Crystalize)

Shikai: (not achieved)
(see above)
In shikai Hibana's blade takes on the appearance of a crystal. It is semi-translucent and a milky white color in tint. By adding some of his reiatsu the blade can become stronger and more durable. The higher the number the number the more difficult it is to weild.
Commands:
1.Hisui(Jade)- The blade turns a green color and it's hardness and durability factor is a level 6. In this form it has basic healing capabilities. However it can't stop severe bleeding or fix organs.
2.Amejisuto(Amethyst)- The blade turns purple and the hardness and durability factor is a level 7. In this form it carries a toxin. When opponent is stabbed they have all the side effects of being drunk.
3.Kougyouku(Topaz)- The blade turns a brownish orange and it's hardness and durability factor is a level 8. In this form it has no special abilities except for creating a light mist around the blade.
4.Rubi(Ruby)- The blade turns red and it's hardness and durability factor is a level 9. In this form the sword can not cut through the color red. It only passes straight through it with out harm.
5. Koungo(Diamond)- The blade turns crystal white in tint and changes in the sunlight defracting colors. The hardness and durability factor is a level 10. nothing can break it. In this form it becomes incredibly heavy to wield and has high momentum when swung.
Bankai: Shinabiru Hibana (Wilting Ice Flower)
(not achieved)
The Icicle forms on the other side of the blade and the katana becomes a double sided blade. The pods from shikai remain on the blade. When the sword strikes an opponent a pod is planted on the area. Ryuta can only plant one pod on a opponent every 10 minutes. The pods have a 2 minute waiting period before the pod blossoms into a flower and can start using it's affect. The flower has 5 minutes till it wilts and dies. The flower allows Ryuta to slow down the area in which the flower has blossomed. Once the flower wilts Ryuta has to wait 3 minutes in order to plant a new pod on the opponent.

Special Accessories: Ryuta carries a bag of candy in his shihakusho.

Skills: Can smell the scent of kido and can tell the type of being the person is by their scent. Can quickly analyze a situation.

Abilities:Average Shunpo
Bakudo
1. Sai (塞, Restrain) Locks a target's arms in place behind their back.[3]Incantation: unknown.
4. Hainawa (這縄, Crawling Rope) An energy rope entangles the target's arms.[4]Incantation: unknown.
8. Seki (斥, Repulse) Creates a round shield that seems to temporarily paralyze and repel whatever strikes it.[5]Incantation: unknown.
9. Geki (撃, Strike) Engulfs the target in red light, completely paralyzing them. Incantation: "Disintegrate, you black dog of Rondanini!! Look upon yourself with horror and then claw out your own throat!" ("自壊せよロンダニーニの黒犬!! 一読し・焼き払い・自ら喉を掻き切るがいい!")

Hado
1. Shō (衝, Thrust) Pushes the target away from the caster.[28]Incantation: unknown.
4. Byakurai (白雷, Pale Lightning) The user fires a concentrated, powerful lightning bolt from their finger.[29]Incantation: unknown.


Personality: Ryuta is childish and clingy and always wants his way. If candy is stolen or harmed in anyway he throws a tantrum and will go on a rampage if not given candy.

Biography/History: Growing up in a small district of the Rukongai he was raised by a girl he called Sister. From the time he was 5 he wanted to taste the candies of the world. His drive to do this led him to a candy store far from home. When he arrived home he discovered his Sister was killed by a hollow. He searched and searched for the hollow but never found it. He suffers separation anxiety and gets attached to nice people quickly. Despite his age Ryuta is a genius for his age. However because of his age no one takes him seriously.

Signature/Patented Technique: none

Guild Status: member

Online Schedule: I am on everyday from 4:30-10 during the week and all day on the weekends  
PostPosted: Sun Oct 04, 2009 2:39 pm
Wow~! I like the art XDD

Okay so, it would be nice if you had complete sentences in the first few sections (like physical appearance and descriptions and such) instead of listing. Also, pictures aren’t supposed to replace words in profiles. They are just posted for visual aid. (: (although your pictures are very nice)
And, your shikai is very confusing…
Is it basically just kido applied to your katana? I don’t get what it does.
Besides, your character doesn’t know much kidou, which leads my to my next point.
The Bakudo and Hado you posted is way too much.
I think they only allow kidos 1-10 from the start, and you have to learn the rest.

I think everything else is fine. (:
So just elaborate a little more on the first few sections, fix up your shikai, and delete the higher-leveled kido.
 


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PostPosted: Mon Oct 05, 2009 1:21 pm
Okay great! ;D
You're ready to roleplay. :3
 
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