My new poem. It is depressing.

[Akira Sai Yamada]

I gave you my heart I gave it all
but all you do is let that love fall
I thought you loved me as I love you
Guess it was too good to be true
You made it hurt beaten and tattered
now it lies broken and shattered
Goodbye and adieu
this is goodbye and now I hate you
You screw with emotion not knowing the price
I guess that means your heart is like ice
So much crying and thoughts of dying
Well I hope your glad while you stand there sighing
You never cared like you said
Now I think Im better dead
this is my final end
this time it its not pretend
Goodbye I love you or so I did
For all this hate for me you hid
No more hate no more pain
I will never love again

WHat do you think?  

[Otulissa]

Well-written though~! I like the format, and how there is no punctuation.  

[Miss_Marissa315]

Wow, this is really good. biggrin Check out mine if you'd like.
http://www.gaiaonline.com/guilds/viewtopic.php?t=19351713