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Parasitic Fetus

PostPosted: Thu Dec 01, 2005 6:54 pm


I'm here to introduce myself, because I'm new. I would appreciate it very much if you would give me any suggestions to help my work. I am currently working on a few poems, a story, and a fanfic. So, if anyone would like to help me out, i'll share a bit about my fanfic (the current leader in priorities). This is a sample of (possibly) more to come:

To Kill A God
In ancient times, those known as Gods merely watched mortals from on high
But then the mortals learned the language of the Gods and offered up greedy prayers
And the Gods, who had been living in lonely silence, began to listen
That was the beginning of the end.
Mortal prayers assaulted the ears of the Gods
Like thousands of fingers they reached into the heavens
And pulled the Gods to the mortal realm
The Gods wondered...
Why do the mortals live in such filth and misery
crushed under the weight of their interminable suffering?
Why do they choose to continue living in agony?
The Gods decieded to grace the mortals with peace
and their blessing crept its way across the land
When it was over, they tried to return to the heavens
But their feet, having once touched the earth, were now a part of it
and the Gods were unable to leave
The Grace of the Gods continued to spread
reaching even the earthbound Gods themselves
and it lulled them to sleep
And the Gods lay sleeping
Tainted by the humanity they had touched
~Yukiru Sugisaki~


It would really help if you would give me some ideas and tell me whether I should continue this story or not! THANX! heart
PostPosted: Thu Dec 01, 2005 7:11 pm


No suggestions? Oh well, I'll just go cry off in my little corner for now.

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PostPosted: Thu Dec 01, 2005 8:42 pm


Kuro-chan!!! Is that yours? I remember you reading it to me but I didn't know it was yours...oh well, I still love it!
PostPosted: Fri Dec 02, 2005 2:51 pm


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Kuro-chan!!! Is that yours? I remember you reading it to me but I didn't know it was yours...oh well, I still love it!


It's a quote from Yukiru Sugisaki, and it re-re-reinspired my story. I just need about a thousand ideas before I can actually put it down on paper. Not to mention the fact I have to up my writing skills by a thousand. sad

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Parasitic Fetus

PostPosted: Fri Dec 02, 2005 10:02 pm


And yet again no one wants to help me in my quest to finish a story.
PostPosted: Mon Dec 05, 2005 4:46 am


O.o I'm not quite sure what your story is about. Is it about the Death of the Gods? Hmm.. I donno.

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PostPosted: Sat Dec 10, 2005 10:21 am


hmm...if I remember correctly, Kuro-chan's story is about a race of Gods that were killed and the main character is a god and she doesn't really know it...or something like that. I'll get her on to clarify her story...
PostPosted: Mon Dec 12, 2005 4:47 pm


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hmm...if I remember correctly, Kuro-chan's story is about a race of Gods that were killed and the main character is a god and she doesn't really know it...or something like that. I'll get her on to clarify her story...


Shut your face! ><; I can't help it if I'm slow. But, I will get a basic outline of the story up eventually...

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Elvane

PostPosted: Fri Dec 16, 2005 1:23 pm


I really like it! It reminds me of this one story I've been writing... somewhat. heart
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