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 Posted: Sun Oct 25, 2009 4:42 pm
If you want to go check it out, here's the URL:: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5425711/1/Forever_and_NeverThe basis of it? L found Light out before he was killed. Misa was also condemmed. But, L, being smart as he was, planned to change Light for the better. He somehow knew that the Death Note had corrupted Light, and had decided to change that. Light was saved from the death penalty, but Misa wasn't. (awww.) After twenty-four days of being together in HQ, the two start falling in love. (How cute...<3) Meanwhile...Roger finds out that L took Light out of prison and tells Matt, Mello, and Near. They run away from the orphanage to find L. Read it to find out more! <3
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Posted: Sun Oct 25, 2009 7:10 pm
I hope your story ends up well, and i will be laughing on December 22, 2012 
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Posted: Mon Oct 26, 2009 2:44 pm
I love it. Please, write more! I freaking cracked up when Light stuck his tongue out at the criminal and got slapped, Matt told Mello he was facepalmed by Near, and L scared the crap out of Light. It's awesome. You rock.
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Posted: Mon Oct 26, 2009 4:20 pm
teamedward790 I love it. Please, write more! I freaking cracked up when Light stuck his tongue out at the criminal and got slapped, Matt told Mello he was facepalmed by Near, and L scared the crap out of Light. It's awesome. You rock. Thankyouthankyouthankyouthankyouthankyouthankyou!!! That is like...awesome! I do so love critique, so if you have any insults to my style, word choice, event speed, detail lackingness...ect, please leave a review and tell me. I'll try to improve! And, again, thanks a bunch! Kimmy:: I have two followers that I know of now! Whoo!
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Posted: Mon Oct 26, 2009 6:45 pm
One tip, though: Don't call him L. Call him Ryuuzaki. It's more appropriate.
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Posted: Tue Oct 27, 2009 11:12 am
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Posted: Tue Oct 27, 2009 7:55 pm
teamedward790 One tip, though: Don't call him L. Call him Ryuuzaki. It's more appropriate. As Light gets to know him more, I'll slowly transition into calling him Ryuzaki. It's over that person's point of view. Sometimes, Mello thinks of Light as Kira, so thats how I'll write it until the dumb blonde grows fonder of Light...Get my logic?
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Posted: Wed Oct 28, 2009 3:54 am
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Posted: Wed Oct 28, 2009 8:32 am
But I've had horrible writer's block for the past few days, so there might not be a new chapter for some time...
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Posted: Thu Nov 26, 2009 4:20 pm
Oh noes! Writer's block sucks! Hope it works out ok, 'cause I need MOAR!
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Posted: Fri Nov 27, 2009 2:14 pm
I read the first chapter and its really good. I plan on reading the rest 3nodding
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Posted: Tue Jan 05, 2010 8:59 am
wow....thats all I can say... 3nodding heart
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Posted: Wed Jan 06, 2010 10:57 pm
Awesomeness!!!!!!!!!!!! ^^ xd
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Posted: Sat Feb 13, 2010 5:24 am
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